First, I’m not gonna focus on the feelings nor the violence for this story. No, instead, I’ll be focusing on the magic. And also make it how I originally got inspired by it; by Howl’s Moving Castle. So yeah, there might be parts of the story that seem familiar to Howl’s Moving Castle. It’s inspiration, not plagerism. SO, I WON’T BE ADDING THE REALLY WEIRD SHUGO CHARA PARTS.
UPDATE: Okay, so this will also be my story blog where I put my stories like “Hai Woodland” and “Super Pikes 32!” That story is when I get sucked into a Mario video game and it’s inspired by .hack//. HOPEFULLY, I’LL BE HAPPY WITH THIS VERSION OF IT AND NOT REWRITE IT ALL OVER AGAIN. And if you’re upset about it just as I was about to write the last chapter, I’m sorry.
So far, I haven’t been happy with the story. I made Celia look like a big cry baby for heaven’s sake. That’s why I’m gonna lay off the Shugo Chara inspiration and get right back to the awesomeness of H.I.V.E. and now .hack// Whatever works. SO YEAH, I’m gonna rewrite it soon, now I just deleted the chapters. (SORRY IF YOU LIKED IT, BUT I DIDN’T!!!)
That means sorry in Japanese, since I’m sorry for not really writing the new chapters lately. I needed inspiration + I HAD NO IDEA WHAT TO WRITE!!! This song was a GREAT inspiration, though:
Okay, as soon as the book becomes a movie, this is DEFINETLY gonna be the song for “The Shadow Prince” tribute on Youtube. XP
How I got inspired for the characters so far. Actually, before I knew of Shugo Chara, I was writing the story and then I saw the show. I was like, “OH MY GOSH! THIS IS LIKE ‘THE SHADOW PRINCE!’” But I know that the writers would never steal my stuff even when it’s not famous. Now, let’s get to the good part.
Elijah & Milisa: At first, they were supposed to be 10 year old twins. But since Elijah is a dirty blonde and Milisa has black hair, I thought they should be friends instead. I got inspired at first by Naruto and Sakura, but then I thought it would be better if they were like Len and Rin from Vocaloid. See?
Trevor: He was originally supposed to look like Zora from “Kingdom Hearts”. But then I got remembered of plagerism, so I decided to get inspired another way. My source; Kukai from “Shugo Chara” for his wild personality. Trevor’s always trying to find new ways to have adventures with Celia when they were kids.
Zhen: My fangirl inspirations came to him from Ikuto from “Shugo Chara”, Balmung from “.hack” and some others that I probably don’t want to talk about… But yeah, he’s the exact opposite of Trevor even though they’re twins; calm with a steady voice.
Celia: The shocking part. Celia was a little inspired by Amu from “Shugo Chara” and Luka from Vocaloid (the long peach hair part…) , but Celia’s inspired from who I actually am or want to be. o-o I want to be more quiet than how I usually am.
Melisa’s name can be spelled two ways; Melisa and Milisa. So that explains the confusion. Her parents had different opinions over her name when she was born; Michelle or Marissa. That’s when her grandmother decided to just name her Melisa and she (Milisa) always mispelled it. So that explains it.
Actually, I decided that Celia shouldn’t have her own song (since the title of it is basically part of an old rock group called Poison) BUT INSTEAD, Zhen should have his own. (There’s a part where it’s a duet with Celia.) I GOT THE IDEA FROM THIS VIDEO:
Well, a new person named narutoshippuden3435 came to this blog after checking my 13,000 hit-counted one and she says that she actually likes it! FINALLY! SOMEBODY BESIDES DJ READS THE BOOK!!! (Well, Dj and I is best friends and she checks by time) So yeah, I’ll try and find an opprunity to write almost ALL of the chapters so that I can get it done with and continue “Hai Woodland”. (My computer won’t let me type it since it’s on Flashdrive and won’t work. T_T)
Pikes steps out with 32 ways to exit
P.S. Quiz!
Okay, so this just a fan’s point of view even though I know who she gonna be with.
Thanks to the Cantarella video I put up, I thought of a new ending to the story! o-o Wow, I change things often…But yeah, it’s kind of inappropiate so yeah…You might want to be at least old enough for a few cuss and “grown-up” words. JUST WARNING YA!!! Hehehe…
UPDATE: For an odd reason, it made my heart pound at the end. o-o Oh yeah, now I know why…
It’s called Canterella by Kaito and Miku and I think it’s a good song!
The scenes and the song want me to make a music video after the book becomes a movie with the song OR I can make an Amuto (Amu x Ikuto) video with the song. o-o It’s hard to decide…
If you read some of the chapters, you can already tell that Milisa is a fangirl of the umm…”relationship” that gets between Zhen and Celia. Yeah, I was thinking at one part, she should nearly faint when the 2 get stuck in a moment and Elijah’s like, “Fangirl” so she gets really mad and yeah. XD Funny… And then the unexpected twist comes after that, but it gets resolved. BUT THEN, another problem occurs and the whole storyline follows, BLAH BLAH BLAH! Unexpected twist, fight, end, big decision. Yes, there shall be a sequel! But this one doesn’t really have action. Actually, it’s probably just the epilogue, not a whole entire story. D: Oh well.